tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post4426216603552033018..comments2023-05-11T12:10:11.896+01:00Comments on Author Naomi Shaw: Tantalizing Tuesday - 4 February: The CaveUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-71985015280739378142014-02-06T19:57:08.628+00:002014-02-06T19:57:08.628+00:00I feel he's doing everything well to comfort h...I feel he's doing everything well to comfort her. It's too bad she doesn't enjoy his enthusiasm. The mood is set with his discoveries, but conflict surfaces when she tells him she doesn't like this adventure, or maybe too many of them. You have a great conflict brewing to resolve possibly with more adventure in the cave. A great beginning..Pablo Michaelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-13737323610143290202014-02-06T09:46:47.629+00:002014-02-06T09:46:47.629+00:00Beautifully written and the ending caught me total...Beautifully written and the ending caught me totally by surpriseJulez S Morbiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-67584953110301006822014-02-06T01:26:41.196+00:002014-02-06T01:26:41.196+00:00nice twist in the ending.... well written ... grea...nice twist in the ending.... well written ... great visuals hugs T Theresa Stuarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11358840862626364430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-84173374380576569042014-02-05T16:50:46.885+00:002014-02-05T16:50:46.885+00:00The devil is in the details and details are in res...The devil is in the details and details are in research, as we know. It may not be fun, but...oh, what we do for love. This is like a tight bud, on the verge of opening, blossoming. This could be the beginning of a much longer, great story, Naomi. Well wor th the wait! xoMuffy Wilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.com