tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post8232256237773555056..comments2023-05-11T12:10:11.896+01:00Comments on Author Naomi Shaw: Flash Fiction Friday - 20 September: WaitingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-87104338755564754242013-09-25T12:50:03.865+01:002013-09-25T12:50:03.865+01:00After her ordeal, she must be anxious as hell. I a...After her ordeal, she must be anxious as hell. I and the reader can only hope she lands the position.Pablo Michaelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-78969004499551686772013-09-22T06:17:52.157+01:002013-09-22T06:17:52.157+01:00Loved this and I am so glad she kept her dream a l...Loved this and I am so glad she kept her dream a live and didn't give up. I hope she gets the part and continues on with her dream. :)Rolling Muse in The Roseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11584542480191015817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-50866175199022993552013-09-22T01:06:36.801+01:002013-09-22T01:06:36.801+01:00I love to read inspiring pieces and I hope she get...I love to read inspiring pieces and I hope she gets her dreamDaveehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09939904353100495515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-37117939206935976672013-09-21T21:24:00.462+01:002013-09-21T21:24:00.462+01:00Oh hope she gets the part! Lovely flash about this...Oh hope she gets the part! Lovely flash about this young woman's determination!gemma parkeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-21543885284076428642013-09-21T16:13:53.893+01:002013-09-21T16:13:53.893+01:00A lovely story of a young woman who refuses to giv...A lovely story of a young woman who refuses to give up her dreams. It's a timeless lesson - quitters never win and winners never quit.Benjamin T. Russellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12804675835177034017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-28734056132016200342013-09-20T20:32:14.376+01:002013-09-20T20:32:14.376+01:00The tension you mounted in the story is palpable. ...The tension you mounted in the story is palpable. As if there isn't enough pressure for ballerina's to begin with, yours was heightened because of her accident. Great construction, flow, pace and angst. I felt her anxiety. Loved this flash, Naomi. Loved it!:) xoMuffy Wilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-73421429114727752582013-09-20T18:49:07.998+01:002013-09-20T18:49:07.998+01:00I could feel the passion for the dance she just de...I could feel the passion for the dance she just delivered. Great Flash. xxJ.P. Stevenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05033779212923707114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-1936424829592339092013-09-20T16:53:51.811+01:002013-09-20T16:53:51.811+01:00Oh, I hope she gets the job!!Oh, I hope she gets the job!!Doris O'connorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01403777653378673290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-78112949834760964422013-09-20T16:52:19.780+01:002013-09-20T16:52:19.780+01:00Ooo Great Flash! I hope she gets positive results!...Ooo Great Flash! I hope she gets positive results! Leann Mitchellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11874861055798286003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-26182458260227938672013-09-20T16:51:22.320+01:002013-09-20T16:51:22.320+01:00Love the backstory you created here. Nice job.Love the backstory you created here. Nice job.Laura Levothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05175074674908122958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-23509599519286585072013-09-20T16:25:59.904+01:002013-09-20T16:25:59.904+01:00Brilliant flash, Naomi. I for one, understand all ...Brilliant flash, Naomi. I for one, understand all about her pain and dreadJulez S Morbiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.com