tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post8770413375784050610..comments2023-05-11T12:10:11.896+01:00Comments on Author Naomi Shaw: Tantalizing Tuesday - 26 November: WatchingUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-29591247950408690292013-12-01T19:43:46.583+00:002013-12-01T19:43:46.583+00:00Lucky Dan. Nice to know that she can still grip hi...Lucky Dan. Nice to know that she can still grip his attention so completely. Lovely seductive writing leading to a gorgeously romantic ending.Jake Maldenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03660299243480748135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-55880205549318972792013-11-27T13:04:20.032+00:002013-11-27T13:04:20.032+00:00Oh, the ending was just perfect! :-)Oh, the ending was just perfect! :-)<br>Doris O'connorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01403777653378673290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-44826976983468065522013-11-27T10:42:45.551+00:002013-11-27T10:42:45.551+00:00Finely polished tease, especially the surprising t...Finely polished tease, especially the surprising twist for the ending. I love this description, "provocative way that almost had Dan's eyes out on stalks." Well done.Pablo Michaelshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11404100997386474731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-78737269662290131522013-11-26T19:35:04.580+00:002013-11-26T19:35:04.580+00:00Excellent Naomi I wasn't expecting that ending...Excellent Naomi I wasn't expecting that ending at allJulez S Morbiushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-81057710173335373912013-11-26T17:19:24.702+00:002013-11-26T17:19:24.702+00:00Great twist! I really loved the way you painted t...Great twist! I really loved the way you painted the picture, and titling it "Watching" set the twist up wonderfully. Really nice, Tease!Molly Synthiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01869242353609554195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8212791593435027309.post-43878090470462621842013-11-26T17:09:47.541+00:002013-11-26T17:09:47.541+00:00Beautiful, Naomi! Roleplaying strangers is a tanta...Beautiful, Naomi! Roleplaying strangers is a tantalying provocative way to add spice and seduction in the form of suggested betrayal to any relationship. So I really enjoyed the plot twist at the end! You are a clever one, aren't you?! :) xoMuffy Wilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.com