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A myriad of emotions
went through Dave, as the door slammed shut behind him and he heard
footsteps racing along the corridor. The knots inside his stomach
screwed a notch tighter.
“Oh God!
He looked around in
despair, at all his work, which had been pushed off the desk and now
lay strewn about him on the floor. A plant had been knocked off a
cabinet, soil spilled around it, and a mug had been thrown and
smashed, lying in pieces, it's contents spilled and staining the
wall.
“Damn.”
It didn't matter one
jot, however. All he cared about was that Katy was gone He sighed,
went to the window, his eyes searching everywhere outside for her.
Persistent rain , which
beat against the window, made this difficult for Dave. With furrowed
brow, he pressed his hands and face up against it, his hot breath
making a misty patch on the cool glass.
He saw Katy come out of
the building, running, with coat sailing behind in the wind. As she
stopped, briefly, and looked up at the window, Dave wondered if he
would see her again. One tear mirrored a raindrop, as it rolled down
his cheek.
Very romantic, touching. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Angelica
DeleteA sad piece, but very well-written to where it left me. Good work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ray. I have plans for this story
DeletePowerful yet beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Julez. There's more to this story
DeleteOh my goodness, what a sad piece. What on earth happened for her to flee like that? Fabulous tease, Naomi :)
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