Friday, 13 April 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - 13 April: Don't Touch

Well it's Flasher time again and I'm pleased to be back in the thick of it.; A lovely picture this week for a prompt. One hundred words, no more, no less and a group of talented writers giving their inspired versions. So I thank you for reading mine and hope you will comment. Then take a journey around the others to see how these wonderful writers got inspired.

Don't Touch

“Isn’t she the most beautiful woman ever? Look at the luscious curves.”

Detective Yates peeked through the slats of the vertical blinds at the woman opposite who had no curtains. “Do you think she knows I watch her?”

“She knows,” snorted Sergeant Ross, feigning disinterest.”

“She’s gorgeous. Oh, the times I’ve imagined kissing her, inhaling the scent on her shining hair, before taking her completely….” His voice tailed off.

“It will be your job if the Chief finds out!”

“It’s no good, I have to go round. Cover me Ross. If he catches me fucking his wife, he’ll kill me!”


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  1. Ha! but it will probably be worth it! Great post as always Naomi, glad you're back.

  2. Glad you're back Naomi, that was great :) But you know the Chief is going to find out ;)

    1. Maybe the Chief will join in. Great Flash, Naomi!

  3. Naughty naughty naughty.....GREAT JOB!!

  4. A guy once told me that women have half the money and all the kitty....can make a man do anything, even risk his job. Great FFF

  5. she makes an excellent temptress. I could feel his pull to her, nice!!

  6. Love the ending, left me wavering between turned on and giggly!
    Fabulous FFF.

  7. It is so nice to have you back and full throttle, at that. Wonderful flash, as usual. Yeah, she knows cause she wants somma that cop.:) xo

  8. Sum Biscuit! I had my comment typed and the power hiccuped. We are having storms and Tornados tonight in our area. Yeah Oklahoma! Anyway! Great flash. I hope she was worth it. That he has a fond memory to beat off to with hand sanitizer in his new career as a janitor.

  9. Fantastic Flasher! Heat and humour, I love it!

  10. Oh boy thats dangerous!

    Loved it


  11. Naughty, naughty, naughty… I loved this one. She’s so hot he disregards the fact that she’s the Chief’s wife. So freaking scandalous. ;o)

  12. Ah, the risks men will take for love and/or lust. Perhaps his Captain will be understanding and invite him to a MMF party. Now that would be interesting. Great Post Ms. Naomi


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