After a writing break I'm back. And this week I bring you an exerpt from my WIP The Locket. Here we find Sorcha, sent from Ireland to England to work in service, has just arrived at the house where she is to take up the position of a maid.
They finally arrived at
dusk. Leaving the road, the horses guided the carriage down a long,
fir lined driveway and finally drew up to a halt at the front of
Grantham House. Sorcha looked out, her mind filled with anticipation
at the huge stone building that was going to be her future residence.
Sorcha carefully got
down from the carriage, smoothed down her skirt and checked to see if
her hair was still tidy. She thanked the coach driver, who had done
a sterling job getting her safely there, gave the horses a quick pet
and picked up her bag heading toward the house, each footstep
crunching on the stones underfoot.
In the dim light of
late evening, Grantham House transcended before her, huge, like no
place she had ever seen before, almost menacing. Sorcha suddenly
wished she was back home in Ireland, sitting by a cosy fire,
surrounded by her brothers and sisters, talking to her Ma. She
scolded herself inwardly, for not looking forward to this new
adventure. She lifted her arm up to knock the door. Taking hold of
the doorknocker, a huge brass one with a lions head,the weight and
enormity of it surprised her and as Sorcha lifted, it slipped from
her fingers and returned to the huge oak door with a large thud.
After a few minutes the
door opened and a man of medium build, who wore a dark suit, and
dry, aging skin peered down at her. He had thinning white hair and
heavy bags under his squinting blue eyes, and before Sorcha could
speak, he barked a couple of questions at her.
“Hello. Are you
expected? What is your name.”
Sorcha suddenly found
her voice again. “I'm Sorcha, and I'm the new maid. I am expected.”
“Ah. Well, you're
late. I'm Lambert, butler to the house. You'll need to go around to
the side, where the servant's entrance is.” His look softened as he
gave her a thin lipped smile, then pointed out the direction Sorcha
should go. “I'll let the housekeeper, Mrs Madison know that you are
here.”
Sorcha thanked him and
picked up her bag again, following the butler's directions to the
servants entrance. The door was far less grand than the main door,
although still oak only had a small less ornate doorknocker. Shortly
after knocking, the door was opened by a tall, thin, very angular
looking woman, who Sorcha guessed was in her forties.
Sounds like a good read. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Christiane glad you liked it
DeleteI imagine she's scared and excited to be in such a new and strange place. Great tease and thanks for joining us again!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Angelica, I'm glad to be back
DeleteQuite an adventure for her. Hope her new employers are kind to her!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and your comment. She'll find out what her new employers are like soon
DeleteNice intro for the story. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks KC glad you liked it
DeleteWelcome back! I look forward to reading more of this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lucy, I'm glad you enjoyed it
DeleteGreat teaser, sets a good scene :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Elodie
DeleteLove the descriptions and the atmosphere you've created!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Lea
DeleteExcellent scene setting and great teaser, Naomi!
ReplyDeleteThanks , glad you liked it Nicola
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