It's Friday again. That lovely time of the week where a group of talented writers have a given picture and post 100 word (no more, no less) stories inspired by it. Here is my offering entitled Beware. I hope you enjoy it and leave me a comment. Then take a journey to read the other stories by some really
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A gust of wind blew in from the open window when Marco awoke, enveloping his bare chest. However, he woke not from the cold wind, but from a numbing chill on his neck, sending a searing pain across his forehead.
The tip of the ice cube touched his Adam’s apple and arctic rivers followed the contours of Marco’s well-defined neck muscles down to his shoulders.
He cringed. He made fists with his big hands and clenched his teeth. Clamping his eyes shut, Marco threw his head back and groaned.
“Painful?” Questioned Linda. “That’s what you get for coming home drunk.”
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Hope you enjoyed ;)
Oh, the painful pleasure of payback! What a beautifully written piece! Great flash:) xo
ReplyDeleteRevenge a dish best served cold. Great
ReplyDeleteSuch sensual revenge, wonder what she'll do next? Oh, I want to know!
ReplyDeleteHahaha. That was great! Love the revenge angle.
ReplyDeleteSomeone's going to get it! Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteLove the payback....Fantastic FF...
ReplyDeleteIt's moments like these that make me glad that i stopped drinking until I got drunk. Great Flash!
ReplyDeleteLoved the twist at the end! Great Flasher.
ReplyDeleteGrrrrrrggh, she couldn't just wake him up with a blow-job, she had to resort to the ole ice-cube trick? That is cruel and inhumane punishment, it would serve her right if he throws-up all over her. Nice Naomi, I love the twist on the end.
ReplyDeleteA blow-job Benjamin??? How is that sending any revenge vibes at all? Unless she bit him. LOL. Loved the flasher.
ReplyDeleteBeware indeed! Great FFF.
ReplyDeleteLOL! Loved it! That is some cruel revenge and clever too. Might have to steal that idea when the hubby comes home drunk next time. ;o)
ReplyDeleteLoved this Naomi. He deserves what he got. A blow job? Only if I had the ice cube or 2 in my mouth. LOL You did an awesome job and it was well written. :)
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