Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, the weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Every Sunday wonderful authors post eight to ten sentences of their work. Please show some love by following the links and reading. Comments are always appreciated My offering is from my WIP The Locket. Here, Jake, who is away at a conference, has had a visitor in his hotel room.
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Sonia
glanced down at his legs briefly, then kicked off her stilettos and
shed her coat, letting it drop to the floor, where it swished to a
halt in a heap around her slim ankles. This revealed the rest of her
black basque, and lacy top black fish net stockings.
She
lost any upper hand from then on, however as his eyes held her,
rooted to the spot. She felt Jake's eyes almost burn her, as his gaze
moved slowly, drinking in her body. Beginning at her toes, he
journeyed upward, along her stocking adorned legs, up to the lacy
tops and where he paused momentarily at her hips, murmuring soft coos
of approval searched for panties and saw none. She tried to move
forward as he continued up, but his gaze held her. Sonia's hands
though went behind her, almost grasping the wall. Her heaving
breasts strained beneath the tight constraints of the corset, and
Sonia shook her hair, the long locks tumbling down onto them, meeting
with Jake's eyes. Beads of perspiration appeared on her forehead,
and, looking down Sonia felt happy at the sight of Jake's straining
lump at his groin.
I love how his gaze held her in place! I believe it's "rooted" to the spot?
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by and enjoying. I rectified my error.
DeleteLol - on the last line - what makes Sonia happy :-)
ReplyDeleteTweeted.
Thanks Victoria
DeleteWhat is is about basques and stockings that so appeal to men? No, don't answer that. I think I know. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachel
DeleteShe came prepared! Hot and sexy scene, Naomi.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alexis
DeleteI'm not sure, and forgive me if I'm wrong ... but I think the lady might possibly have seduction on her mind. Maybe.
ReplyDeleteI think she just might. Thanks Ed
DeleteVery sexy snippet indeed :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Doris :)
DeleteSo very sensual. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jessica
DeleteShe sure knows how to heat up the atmosphere! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteShe sure does, thanks Elizabeth
DeleteIs it hot in here or is it me? Whew. Good snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane
DeleteThings are getting sexy! I like it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy
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