Welcome to another Flash Fiction Friday. That's the time when a group of awesome writers have a given picture and one hundred words precisely. Show some love, follow the link and read their flashers. Comments always appreciated.
Flashers
A watery light from an early morning sun shone through the trees in the forest as damp, fresh, swirling mists rose up and surrounded Thomas. He stood; naked and confused, in a half light that picked out the dewdrops from a bed of grass that trickled down his body.
Snatches of a fight worried Thomas and he stumbled through an array of twigs and leaves, struggling to remember the previous night; his mind foggy as dawn mists. From somewhere nearby a whiff of blood reached him and brought it all back. Licking his lips, Thomas remembered his new werewolf status.
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Haunting! Your beautiful vivid imagery of his surroundings are perfect yet don't give away the end.
ReplyDeleteLoved the first line, really pulled me into the scene x
ReplyDeleteI agree with Michael. A well thought out introduction painting a premonition of foreboding, Felt it. Scared me. Loved it. :) xo
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! I wonder whats been happening?
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done, Naomi. A beautifully etched scene, perfectly setting up the lupine development. Really enjoyed that.
ReplyDeleteWonderful and loving scene loved it Naomi keep it up
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written flash Noami
ReplyDeleteLovely! Your descriptions brought this to life :-)
ReplyDeleteWhatever Thomas did the night before, when he licked his lips at the smell of blood, it became obvious he's relishing his new werewolf life. That single line at the end made this flash for me. Excellent Naomi.
ReplyDeleteVery visual! Well written flash Naomi.
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