Friday, 24 January 2014

Flash Fiction Friday - 24 January: Checking the emails

It's Friday and time to Flash. A group of awesome writers draw inspiration from a given picture using one hundred words only. Please show some love by following the link, reading and commenting. This week mine is called Checking the emails Enjoy


“ I just need to check my emails,” Cheryl called to her husband who was waiting impatiently.

“Well ... okay, but hurry up or we’ll be late for work,” Tom replied, watching the time.

“ I will." Cheryl slipped off her jacket and sat down. She opened the laptop and switched on. After skimming through her emails she logged in to their online bank account. She immediately spotted an unfamiliar payment. Gasping loudly, she called out to her husband.

“Please can you explain this ?"

“What’s the matter?”

The payment read 'Subscription to Pleasure City Swingers’.

“Ah. I meant to tell you ...”


  1. Now, is she happy about that or not? :D Lol

  2. An early Valentine's Date Nite? Very cute, Naomi! Someone's in for so fun !!! <3 xo

  3. Oh, he's in trouble.or maybe he wanted to surprise her. The lesson learned- check with spouse or partner before committing to a swingers group..

  4. LOL. This one had me laughing. I'd love to hear his explanation ;-)

  5. Great flash Naomi a little naughty and the end had me smiling

  6. Love it! Great minds think a like. lol. Great flash! Someone is in deep trouble. lol

  7. Whew! That was greatness! I'm guessing he better build a warm dog house for himself! LOL!

  8. Oh boy, but what happens next!! Naomi! You're evil to leave us hangin' :) Love how it starts all innocent too. Great flash.


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