Thursday, 12 January 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #5 13 January 2012

Friday is here again. I love these posts. A picture that could tell a story in a thousand words actually tells it in 100. Here is my contribution this week. Also please take the time to read other inspired flashers.



The Surprise


Dana ran through the open doorway and launched herself at Lydia who was lying naked on the bed.

“You could have dressed up,” Lydia laughed as she ran a hand around Dana’s chocolate coloured ass.

“I couldn’t wait to get at you,” she said wriggling closer.

“I love to see you baby, but why does it always have to be here. We could go shopping someday?”

“Not my style. Here you are mine, and I have a surprise. Close your eyes.”

 Dana put her hands either side of Lydia. Then nuzzling her neck she sank two fangs in.

Lydia shrieked.

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Thank you for reading

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Sharita Lira as Rawiya: http://rawiyaerotica.wordpress.com




15 comments:

  1. I didn't expect that end!!! I love to be surprised. Great post :)

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  2. Nice ending twist. Love the paranormal angle. Great post!

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  3. Loved your surprise ending, Naomi!! Now I see why they don't go shopping. You made me laugh. Great FFF.

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  4. Oh my, I bet that was an unhappy surprise at first. Loved it.

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  5. Love the surprise Naomi!

    E~

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  6. Suprise, I'm a vampire! LOL! Awesome post. I'd sure like to know what happened next. Does she turn her, or drain her dry?

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  7. It made me jump! I hope it was pleasurable, l'm sure it was! Great post!

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  8. Damn! What a twist at the end. Made me purr. lol. Always loved a good bite. :)

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  9. Shit, poor Lydia wasn't the only surprised - it certainly caught me with my mouth open. I thought Dana was going to bite something, but I didn't see the fangs coming. Yes, this is a nice paranormal twist on the picture. Now the question that pops into my mind is just how long has Dana been a vamp?

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  10. Wow loved that! Totally wasn't expecting those fangs. Fabulous FFF.

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  11. Probably not the surprise she was expecting! Great post.

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  12. Ouch! Is she going to turn her too or just feed on her, or drain her completely and move on to the next meal?? Nice twist!

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  13. wow, that one caught me off guard. Nice twist at the end!

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  14. Oh hot! I love it. Nicely done Naomi

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