Thursday, 5 January 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #4 - 6 January 2012

One hundred words of inspiration from a picture
Here is my offering

The Commission 

Gino picked up the camera, pointed it and focussed on Caprice’s famous assets.
“Stop looking so uncomfortable,” she said striking up a seductive pose. “I was very surprised you took up this job.”

Gino shifted to get a more revealing shot. “You don’t turn down a commission from ‘Cosmopolitan’. Head up please.” He watched her closely, feeling uncomfortable at the way she was devouring his body with her eyes.

Noticing his warning look, Caprice apologised.

“Mrs Spencer, I am a professional photographer. You may be a top burlesque dancer, but you have no right to seduce your son’s best mate.”



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19 comments:

  1. Jean6 January 2012 at 02:24

    Nice surprise at the end! Funny and fun.

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  2. Patricia Logan6 January 2012 at 02:34

    Woah, Gino better watch out! Very nice interpretation, Naomi

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  3. ERP6 January 2012 at 02:39

    Hee hee hee. Nice one! Love the twist.

    E~

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  4. Yvonne Nicolas6 January 2012 at 03:08

    LOL! Oh man, she’s eyeing her son’s man? That’s messed up. Cougar! *grin* Nice post.

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  5. kimfaulks6 January 2012 at 08:00

    Ah, very well done. Nice twist at the end. I loved it!

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  6. BLMorticia6 January 2012 at 13:08

    oh I like. I want to read more!

    :D

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  7. Lee Brazil6 January 2012 at 13:58

    Oh yeah? He should be so lucky... oh, sorry... Great post!

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  8. Jade6 January 2012 at 14:03

    Oh I always said that it feels good to... date (yes, date is a nice word, isn't it?) younger men... Lucky man if he wakes up and take on her offer...

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  9. Luna Ella Aldora6 January 2012 at 14:58

    Naomi, is he her son's best friend or son's best lover? That might change the comment slightly. *laughs* Devour him all you want, Caprice! Love her name, she seems very "playful." ;)

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  10. Naomi6 January 2012 at 15:02

    over here best mate would mean best friend - but bringing the other scenario into play could liven the story up even more

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  11. Bonni S.6 January 2012 at 15:08

    Love the twist at the end. She's trying to pull a Mrs. Robinson. Great post!

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  12. Katie Harper6 January 2012 at 18:01

    Oh yes, yes she does. She screams cougar.

    Loved this!

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  13. For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea6 January 2012 at 20:13

    Ooooh, a MILF! Awesome! lol Loved your FFF!

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  14. Benjamin Tiberius Russell6 January 2012 at 21:58

    Ah a cougar in disguise or as Lani said, a red hot MILF. Yep, Gino may end up getting more than a plum photo job. Nicely done.

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  15. The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre6 January 2012 at 22:45

    Damn, that is one hell of a FFF! Great work!

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  16. Davee7 January 2012 at 02:57

    Au contrare, a woman goes after what she wants. younger men beware. nice FFF

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  17. Rolling Muse In The Roses7 January 2012 at 03:43

    Omg Nice job! Loved the ending.

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  18. VenusBookluvr7 January 2012 at 04:25

    A little Mrs. Robinson action. Wonderful twist. I love curvy cougers ;-)

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  19. Author Cyril J. Michael7 January 2012 at 20:24

    I think Gino doth protest too much. He wants a bite of the forbidden fruit!
    Nice job.

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