Friday, 6 July 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - 6 July: Lovers Lane

Oh yes! It's Friday again and time for a 100 word flasher, no more no less. All inspired by a given picture. This week my story is called Lovers Lane I hope you enjoy it and take the time to comment. Then do the same by clicking on the link for flashers by other Awesome Writers

The bright sun shone down and Sara blinked her eyes open. It can't be morning already. 
"Shh, sweetheart." Dean kissed her. "We slept all night. We'd better get back soon."

They clung to each other, naked and in love. She looked into his eyes and shivered.
"Where are we?"
"We're in the back of Jennie's car. Lovers Lane. Do you remember how we made love here last night?"
Sara grinned and snuggled closer to Dean. "Mmmmm I remember, wonderful."
Dean looked around for his clothes. "Oh no!" He cried. "Jennie must have been here with someone. She swiped our clothes!"


  1. Looks like they will be traveling home in their Birthday suits!! What a wonderful way to celebrate new love! What a sweet falsh. Reminds me of the aquaduct in California where we used to go "watch the submarine races" on Friday nights. Loved it:) xo

  2. Ohh very romantic and sexy...What a way to spend the night.

  3. Hmm, so why are they in the back Jennie's car? Who the heck is Jennie and why did she take their clothes? I'm thinking Jennie is jealous, she wanted to be part of a menage and they left her out. That wasn't very nice of them, they're lucky she didn't dump a bucket of cold water on them. Loved it Naomi, very nice

    1. It was difficult to include everything with 100 words. As you know a picture paints 1000 words. All these thoughts went through my mind too. Maybe I should continue the story with Jennie getting in on the act. What do you think?

  4. Oh no!!! No clothes? I guess Jeanie didn't care for them making love in her car. Great post!

  5. that Jeanie :) These two are sweet. Would love to see how they do getting home, lol.
    Def think you should continue the story with Jeanie. I get the feeling she might be feeling left out.

  6. Well, that she devil! What a fun flash, Naomi!

  7. Hmm Jennie trickster or jealous witch? Fabulous Flasher!

  8. Funny post! Love your take on the photo.

  9. Great Flash Naomi Loved the ending


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