Tuesday 17 September 2013

Tantalizing Tuesday - 17 September: I Want You


It's Tuesday and that means time for a tantalizing tease. Awesome writers who write a 200 word piece of flash fiction inspired by a self chosen picture. So show some love by reading and commenting. This week mine is called I Want You Enjoy
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They lay together, unclothed. The soft fair hue of her skin against his handsome, bronzed figure.

She put arms around his neck and nibbled on his bottom lip. “I want you,” she purred.

He wrapped his arms around her and gently yet firmly drew her closer. With feather like touches fingertips from one hand traced her spine, grazing every ridge to the small of her back. Then fondled her soft butt cheek, parting it slightly from the other. He spoke no words, just murmured loving sounds, barely audible, into her neck that floated from his mouth and landed as whispers on her skin.

She shivered, arched her back and pressing up against him she moaned. Her nipples tangled with his disorderly array of springy chest hair that stroked his skin. The redness of her nipples deepened, dark against her ivory skin and becoming sensitive as they hardened.

Tingles raced through her body from fingertips to her toes that curled in spasm. Warmth inside her encouraged an accumulation of moisture that trickled from her pussy down her inner thigh. She ran her fingers through his short dark coarse hair, twisting the strands around them whispering, “I'm ready for you now.”
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7 comments:

  1. Beautifully written, very sensual and well worth the wait :)

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  2. Oh wow, that was such a slow captivating read. I enjoyed every word. xx

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  3. Very Sensitively hot! Who said your muse has abandoned you? Forget you ever said that. This TTT is excellent. I particularly like this line- " With feather like touches fingertips from one hand traced her spine, grazing every ridge to the small of her back." and this one- "Her nipples tangled with his disorderly array of springy chest hair that stroked his skin." I don't want you saying your muse has left you ever again.

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  4. Beautiful teaser! My breath caught more than once. Very erotic and romantic! :)

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  5. A very sensual piece perfectly fitting with the photo.

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  6. Loving this Naomi, I especially like ' floated from his mouth and landed as whispers on her skin.' beautiful imagery,

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