Tuesday, 7 January 2014

Tantalizing Tuesday 7 January: Papillon

It's Tuesday again. The first one of 2014 and time for the teasers to entertain you again. A self chosen picture to inspire a 200 word piece of flash fiction. Please show some love in reading and commenting on each to encourage our awesome writers to continue. This week mine is called Papillon. Enjoy

There were only a few people in the bar when the young woman in high heels and a mini so short it displayed the majority of her shapely legs entered. All eyes turned to watch as she sauntered over to the bar with hips swaying and a confident port. 

She perched herself on the vacant stool next to Dan, her mini skirt riding up so high that her suspenders became visible. She threw him a sultry sideways glance from beneath her  blond hair, and her eyes asked  for a drink.

“What can I get you ...?” Dan’s voice stumbled in speaking the words as he noticed her strap drop, revealing a small colourful tattoo.

 “Papillon. Like my tattoo. I’d love a Martini.” Slowly trailing a well manicured finger up the stem of Dan’s beer bottle, she stroked it around her bottom lip before sucking. Then she sipped seductively on her Martini, but started as he put his hand on her thigh.

“Easy tiger,”she laughed. “I think it’s time for bed.”

They left the bar holding hands, not noticing a man in the shadows who had been taking pictures of them and was now on his phone ...


  1. Holy fuck! That is a scorcher AND a cliffhanger. You went way over the top with this one! Naomi, you are a beautiful, creative slut that has left me wet with this one! Ola, whew!! <3 Xo

  2. Wow! Intrigue along with the heat! Loved this one Naomi! Excellent tease, and I can't wait to read the whole thing. (You absolutely must write the whole thing, you understand.)

    1. Fear not Molly, for this is a story that needs to be written

  3. Wonderful...left me on the edge of my seat...and wanting MORE! Bravo!

  4. Ooooh, sensual and intriguing :-)

  5. LOL, I loved the end of it. Very intriguing Naomi.

  6. I feel like a voyeur now...can we have the next scene? :D

  7. Nice ending, Naomi! After all the sly seduction it suddenly turned sinister. Very film noir.


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