Saturday, 27 February 2016

My Sexy Saturday ~ 27 February 2016: A Sexy Paranormal Love


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This week my excerpt is seven sentences from a WIP  The Inheritance. 

Frank is making the long train journey home a totally different person, after his  college course finished. During his journey, he meets a strange, very attractive woman called Natasha who he is immediately attracted to.


“It was because of my ex that my life changed dramatically. Then he left me.”

Natasha sat on Frank's lap, pawed at his shirt with sharp fingernails and brushed his cheek with her red lips. “Now I'm on a mission to get that man who made me like this. Look Frank, the sun is going down and I sense you understand me.”

As the moon became visible a green flash crossed her eyes, and he nodded. He understood better when the same light floated over his.
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Naomi x



10 comments:

  1. Intriguing- brilliant use of the word "pawed".
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    1. Glad you like it Daryl, thank you for reading

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  2. Oooh - is that a full moon ;-)
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    1. Thanks so much Victoria. Glad you like it

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  3. Intriguing! I look forward to reading more.

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  4. Mysterious and sexy. What is the green light, I wonder?

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    1. Thank you for stopping by and reading, Alexis. I really appreciate it

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  5. Sounds as though Natasha may have inherited more than just assets.
    Great snip, Naomi.

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