Friday, 19 January 2018

Flash Fiction Friday ~ 19 January 2018: Dana's Mystery





Cool moonlight filtered through an open window and fell upon Dana, skin like alabaster. Her naked body rested on a grand piano, and her long tangled tresses lay over the crook of an arm. Strewn around her, were roses and loose pages of sheet music. A wine glass had been knocked over and its contents were spilling out. The gun, though, worried Dana more, focussing on it, as she opened her eyes. Her body ached all over, and she tried to remember why.

“What the fuck is going on here?!”

The voice made Dana start. She turned and saw ...






6 comments:

  1. Saw who? You can't leave it there. Excellent

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    1. It's something I need to write more about. Thanks Julez, glad you liked it

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  2. Ohhh!! Cliff hanger! Very sneaky Naomi! I loved it!!

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    1. You know me and my cliffhangers. There is more to be written. Glad you liked it Aurora

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  3. Saw???? Come on I need to know... Brilliant

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    1. Glad you liked it Raven. I will continue this story

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