Thursday, 2 February 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #8 - 3 February 2012: The Decision

Well here we are again. I love these Flash Fiction Fridays. A chance to get inspired by a picture with 100 words exactly.


The Decision

here you are!” Deke called out to Garth, as he spotted him lying on a bank. “What’s the matter?”

Garth was lying on his back, shirt open, with his chest bare to the sun.

“Come on, tell me,” said Deke, sitting beside him. He trailed two fingers down Garth, but he turned his head away.

Finally, Garth sniffed. “I don’t feel a complete man anymore. And it’s always going to be between us. Maybe we should split.”

Deke started laughing. “Don’t talk silly!” I will always love you, scars and everything.” He kissed Garth’s stomach. “You only lost your appendix!”   


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13 comments:

  1. Jade2 February 2012 at 22:05

    haha, very good! I was waiting for something very dramatic! Does that mean Garth is shallow and vain?? Lol
    Good post!

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  2. gemma parkes2 February 2012 at 22:51

    Loved this Naomi! Very funny, l wondered what he was going to have missing!

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  3. Sara York3 February 2012 at 10:58

    LOL, he's got to be a Diva. That was very cute.

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  4. Cassandre Dayne3 February 2012 at 12:30

    How adorable! Loved it

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  5. Kendel Davi3 February 2012 at 16:06

    This was silly good fun! Very nice post, Naomi!!

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  6. Lee Brazil3 February 2012 at 18:48

    LOL - He's not a bit vain is he? A silly little appendix scar, and he's going to give up on romance?

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  7. Benjamin Tiberius Russell3 February 2012 at 21:13

    Self-esteem is such a fragile thing, even something as minor as a small surgical scar can be so dramatic. It may seem silly on the surface, but it can be so true. Nice job Ms. Naomi.

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  8. Sancre Darling aka S.E. Darling4 February 2012 at 01:02

    Naomi, as a surgical scar survivor, I do salute you...lol. I love this. Ego is a fragile thing...something small can really dent it some times...lolol.

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  9. Yvonne Nicolas4 February 2012 at 01:03

    LOL! A little scar makes him feel like less of a man. Wow. Deke has his work cut out for him. Great post!

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  10. VenusBookluvr4 February 2012 at 03:45

    Sounds like he has a Diva on his hands. Love how you handled this sensitively but with humor!

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  11. Jp Archer4 February 2012 at 04:56

    I was wondering why he didn't feel complete and then bam...an appendix?! Come on dude, man up! LOL. Good flash. Thanks for sharing.

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  12. Author Cyril J. Michael4 February 2012 at 20:29

    I would totally have to kick that Diva to the curb. Great job of pulling me in.

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  13. Rolling Muse In The Roses5 February 2012 at 07:01

    Mmmm wow!Nice!

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