Friday 16 March 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - 16 March

It's that time again. Time to create a story in one hundred words only. No more, no less.
I love Flash Fiction Friday. The chance to read talented writers stories from a picture prompt
Thank you for reading mine. I would love to hear your comment. Follow the link to read other stories.



A New Start

Alexis lay back minus skirt, on the sofa, propped up with cushions. The phone rang. Four o’clock every day, he never failed to call. She looked over at his picture and longed for next month when they were due to meet.They met online and ‘clicked’ instantly. Alexis picked up the phone as she bent her knees up and parted her legs.

“Hello baby, how’s my angel,” his chocolate tones sent tingles racing round her.  She slipped her fingers under her panties thinking, this will be gone soon. Everything will be perfect after my final surgery. I’ll be all woman.

12 comments:

  1. OOOOO this could go so many places Naomi! Excellent. Brings up questions like...does the voice on the phone know the true identity?

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  2. What a fascinating way to bring that around. I loved it! So different girl - you go!

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  3. His angel, so sweet!! Love the cliff hanger

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  4. Loved it!!! I loved the twist you put on it. You got me. I would love to read this as a story. I'd buy it in a heartbeat.

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  5. Oh wow! I so did not expect this! What a great FFF! Loved it!

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  6. This is great! The emotional connection to the anticipation brought me in. I'd love to see what happens when the surgery is done.

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  7. Ooh! Not expecting that! Great post Naomi!

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  8. LOL - oh hot damn, that's kinky and hot. You know, maybe if he knew, he wouldn't want her to have the surgery. Maybe she should give him a choice - he might like having something to swing on at night. Ms. Naomi, you have a wicked imagination - I love it.

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  9. Wow, Naomi...that made my mouth drop open. Great spin on the photo. Loved it!

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  10. Great twist! So the guy she met online doesn’t know that she’s not all woman yet? Uh-oh. I hope he gets the surgery before they meet. Nice post Naomi!

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  11. Holy Hell, wasn't expecting that ending. Awesome job Naomi. Was a great tease and a surprising ending. Wonder if her man would be pleasantly surprise or not? Never know, he might like it. ;)

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  12. OMG. You shocked me, and I don't shock that easy. Excellent FFF. Twisted, but great. Does Mr. chocolate voice know?

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