Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Tantalizing Tuesday - 13 November: Surprise

Well it's Tuesday again. A time for the teasers to tantalize you. A personal picture choice and 200 words, no more, no less to inspire a teasing story. Please click the link to read what each awesome writer has written. All comments gratefully received. This week mine is called Surprise. Enjoy
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Marion went to the hotel straight after work, looking forward to the party.  After checking in, she had a quick drink then went up to her room, planning to meet up in two hours.

 She opened her case and hung up her clothes quickly, then began to undress, looking forward to a shower. Suddenly she heard the sound of a key turning. Half undressed, Marion turned to see Tony in the open doorway.

 He grinned at her. “ Surprise! I told them I’d lost my key.” His gaze slowly moved from Marion's dark hair and eyes, the soft white flesh, right down her body, following the luscious curves and eventually coming to rest on her voluptuous plump breasts, still caressed by the cups of a black bra.

 “I wondered if I’d see you. Come in and shut the door.” Marion continued removing her shirt.

With the door closed, they embraced. Tony kissed Marion’s lips, looked deep into her eyes, while his fingers teased her panties down.

She moaned into his mouth, finally saying,

“Share my shower. I need your body now.  I’m invited to my daughter's hen night later.”

“And I have my stag do.”

“Welcome to the family Tony.”



  1. Very naughty tease Naomi excellently written

  2. Ooh! Naughty naughty! Loved it Naomi!

  3. Naughty surprise in deed, Naomi. You wicked woman :) I loved the sensory detail in this sexy tease.

  4. Such a dirty trick you played. I expected the party to be the surprise and it was. Sounds like my families.

  5. Goddamn, Naomi, your 'surprise' was even naughtier than mine! You surpassed yourself for wickedness and the result was a spicy treat. Bad Marion. BAD!!!

  6. Okay, I'm confused. I'm hoping Tony is the father of the groom, not the groom himself. How odd...

  7. Strictly naughty as hell Naomi. I loved the tease!


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