Tuesday, 9 July 2013

Tantalizing Tuesday - 9 July: Late

It's Tuesday, so time to tantalize and tease. A group of awesome writers each choose a picture and write a 200 word piece of flash fiction inspired by it. Each deserves recognition, so please show your love. This week my contribution is called Late Enjoy

“You’re late!” The sharpness of her statement rang in Paul’s ears. He dropped his briefcase in surprise and looked up.

She stood with her back to him, gazing out of the window, obviously waiting for his arrival. In a state of semi undress, she wore a black corset, laced at the back, partially obscured by the long dark hair that hung loosely down her back. Black fishnet stockings and scant black panties complimented her outfit. Her figure was enticingly shapely.

Paul’s eyes however, seemed drawn toward her arms. Crossed to her back, clad in long elbow length black gloves with her hands gripping the handle of a whip, the woman eluded air of menace.

“Well,” she snapped. “Are you going to stand there gawking all night? Come closer.”

Paul took his jacket off and slung it across a chair, then moved closer to the woman. Brushing part of her hair aside and kissed the nape of her neck.

She spun round and with steely blue eyes demanded, “Did I say that you could kiss me?”

“I …”

She cracked the whip sharply against his calf. “Strip!”

“Yes Mistress.” He thought, I love it when the kids are on a sleepover.


  1. "I love it when the kids are at a sleepover"- I burst out laughing with the roles they play when their children are not around. Great flash, extremely well-written. Naomi Shaw is back writing in full flair.

  2. Hmmmm, this seems oddly familiar...right, my house when the kids are away! Love it! :)

  3. Oh, that is the best last line ever!

  4. Very sexy post. I'd love it when the kids had sleepovers too. Great post!!!


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