Friday 11 October 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - 11 October: Don't Go


It's Friday and time for a flash.  One given picture, one hundred words only and some awesome writers getting inspired to come up with flash fiction. Please show the others some love. All comments greatly appreciated. Flashers



Maria gradually let her damp towel drop to the floor. Lamplight streamed in through the skylight and picked out pearls of water that remained, glistening on her tanned naked skin.

She never noticed the naked figure of a man that remained in shadow, until when moving up behind her she felt his fingers trail slowly down her arms before taking hold of her soft plump breasts, drawing her close.

His arousal grew and pushed against Maria's cheeks with promise of closer contact.

As she half turned her head he whispered “Don't go to work. I want to give you dick-tation.”
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10 comments:

  1. So well written but I had laughed aloud when he said "I want to give you dick-tation. Excellent flash. You made my day.

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  2. Such a sexy flash AND you made me giggle at the end. Very well done, Naomi. Welcome home. I missed you. :)

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  3. You had my pulse increasing steadily, nearing a pounding at the last line then, as usual, laughter created coitus-interruptus. Brilliant, whadditellya? Loved it totally:) xo

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  4. Love a bit of steamy Friday naughtiness, Naomi. Great stuff - fun and sexy.

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  5. Naomi, as always, you write such delicious pieces. Great flash.

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  6. *giggles* loved the line dick-tation. Awesome job and welcome back!! Very playful and spicy. :)

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  7. Very hot and she now has a great reason to stay home ;)

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  8. perfect, and love the humor st the end...

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  9. Ha ha ha I bet he does :-) love the terminology twist. xx

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