It's Friday again and time to flash. A group of awesome writers with a given picture write their version of a one hundred word story. So please take time out to read, and support them by leaving a comment. My story this week is called Gloria Enjoy.
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The strange red glow from above surrounded Gloria, who unfurled her lithe body from a slumber and arose, stretching to welcome the light. It was all different to her and she took her time to take everything in. This didn’t worry her however, and in her nakedness an excited apprehensive thrill ran through her.
This was a brand new start for Gloria and she couldn’t help but wonder about her future. Covering her breast she threw her head back and paid homage to the burning planet she had left behind. And brought Gloria into the brave new World.
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Wonderful! I love the idea that she was brought to a brave new world!! This was so good and so beautifully crafted. Loved it :) xo
ReplyDeleteOooh, a rebirth in more ways than one it seems. Love it!
ReplyDeleteExcellent, Naomi I love this and the idea of rebirth you have created.
ReplyDeleteFantastic and awesome tease Naomi I liked the idea of rebirth and" streching to welcome the light " is the beauty of your great imaginative power . Keep it up
ReplyDeleteExcellent transformation from a possibly death doomed planet to a new one for rebirth and survival. Your descriptions are positive and romantic as usual. I love that mood of your writing.
ReplyDeleteLove this. Seems there is so much story to tell. Hope we get to know more about Gloria.
ReplyDeleteSuperwoman, It's odd how even in imagination we import our heros. How apt. Thank you.
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