Tuesday, 11 February 2014

Tantalizing Tuesday Valentine Blog Hop: 11 - 14 February:One Valentine's Kiss

It's Tuesday and not just any Tuesday. The awesome teasers are having a Valentine Blog Hop. There will be self chosen pictures and amazing 200 word flash fiction as normal but this time there are prizes. So click the links to read the wonderful work and please follow instructions to be in with a chance of winning something. My teaser is called One Valentine's Kiss Enjoy
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Grant jerked at his tie and pulled off the offending article shoving it in his jacket pocket.

“Mind if I join you?” he said to a slender woman in a cocktail dress who was perching jauntily on her bar stool.

 Her Chanel no 5 perfume intoxicated him.

“Be my guest,” replied the cool blonde idly indicating to the adjacent stool, but she seemed more interested in dallying an olive around  her Martini glass that sat on the bar in front of her. 

Grant watched her surreptitiously from the corner of his eye as she trailed the olive slowly around her pale pink lips, leaving them wet and glistening, before eating it. 

Noticing a stray droplet falling down onto her throat, Grant instinctively put out a finger, catching it.

“Mmm,” he murmured, sucking on his finger.

Twisting her stool, back to the bar Grant stood. Slipping an arm around he gently tipped her, his warm aroused breath dropping gently onto the head that now rested with long hair flowing behind on the bar.

He delivered the gentlest of butterfly kisses to hers and she smiled.

“I’ve loved you for so long. That Valentine kiss was everything I dreamed it would be.”

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  1. Lovely, romntic, winsome, elegant. So unrequited love from afar is finaly, or nearly so, sated. Very romantic and perfect for Valentine's Day!

  2. Loved your descriptions, so sensuous. :-)

  3. You wrote one of the most gentle passionate kisses I've ever read.The image of the olive, martini glass, and the method of his kiss was definitely a top Valentine's kiss.

  4. So sweet and beautiful, Naomi! I loved the whole atmosphere and the playfulness and the subtle roleplay but I think I love most the kiss and the way you described it. Very nice.

  5. This is the stuff that Valentine loves are made of! Wonderful, whistful, perfection. I hope I find my "Grant" someday!

  6. Sweet excerpt. Husband and wife play-acting? That's a great way to keep the romance alive:)))

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  7. passionate and romantic nicely done hugs T

  8. That was so romantic, I love how they acted like they were strangers, mixing it up a little.

  9. Oh, this is so sweet. Perfect beginning for a romantic evening :-)

  10. Awe! What a great teaser! Looks amazing! Thank you for sharing! Happy Valentines!


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