Welcome to Midweek Tease. A weekly blog hop where amazing authors share a snippet of their work. It may be something completed, or a WIP. Please follow the links to read everyone's offering. And remember, a comment is encouraging to a writer, it means so much. My snippet this week comes from a WIP Night Ride. Enjoy.
Late again and Madison cursed the fact that her car had gone in for
repairs. A meeting at the Lambeth office that Madison had been
assured would finish at 6pm, in plenty of time for her to make the
return journey acroos London, had overrun. Toward the end of the meeting, Madison had
found herself stifling yawns, and hoped that no-one had noticed. Finally it ended and she got up from the uncomfortable chair she had shifted about on. Madison dragged her cream colored Mac on, and not even bothering to do it up
properly, she raced out of the building into the cold night air.
The cold did not really bother her though, the main worry was the
time, and as she hurried, coat tails flapping behind her, along
Streatham High Street and past Brixton Central Library, where she had
spent so much time studying. A new moon shone brightly, lighting up
the dial on the old clock, and looking up at the time, Madison
realized that she had no time to lose if she wanted to get the last tube of the night, affectionately known as the Night
Ride.
Finally, she reached Brixton station and her high heels echoed as
they clattered down the grey stone steps to where she could see the
train just pulling in. Madison heaved a sigh of relief and pulled her
coat in tighter, feeling a gust of wind race around her, wishing
she'd had the good sense to wear a scarf.
Great tease. Nice way to set the scene.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Susanne
ReplyDeleteIt was like I was there, feeling the cold with her. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathleen
DeleteI hate being late! Great descriptions, Naomi!
ReplyDeleteThanks Angelica
DeleteGreat snippet, Naomi! The Tube late at night can be an... interesting place!
ReplyDeleteThanks Lucy
DeleteHmm last tube... I wonder what will happen :-)
ReplyDeleteI wonder. Thanks for your comment Doris
DeleteOh, I thought this was your Tuesday Teaser. I'm glad you're feeling better.
ReplyDeleteThanks Muffy
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