Thursday 5 January 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #4 - 6 January 2012

One hundred words of inspiration from a picture
Here is my offering

The Commission 

Gino picked up the camera, pointed it and focussed on Caprice’s famous assets.
“Stop looking so uncomfortable,” she said striking up a seductive pose. “I was very surprised you took up this job.”

Gino shifted to get a more revealing shot. “You don’t turn down a commission from ‘Cosmopolitan’. Head up please.” He watched her closely, feeling uncomfortable at the way she was devouring his body with her eyes.

Noticing his warning look, Caprice apologised.

“Mrs Spencer, I am a professional photographer. You may be a top burlesque dancer, but you have no right to seduce your son’s best mate.”



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19 comments:

  1. Nice surprise at the end! Funny and fun.

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  2. Woah, Gino better watch out! Very nice interpretation, Naomi

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  3. Hee hee hee. Nice one! Love the twist.

    E~

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  4. LOL! Oh man, she’s eyeing her son’s man? That’s messed up. Cougar! *grin* Nice post.

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  5. Ah, very well done. Nice twist at the end. I loved it!

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  6. oh I like. I want to read more!

    :D

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  7. Oh yeah? He should be so lucky... oh, sorry... Great post!

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  8. Oh I always said that it feels good to... date (yes, date is a nice word, isn't it?) younger men... Lucky man if he wakes up and take on her offer...

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  9. Naomi, is he her son's best friend or son's best lover? That might change the comment slightly. *laughs* Devour him all you want, Caprice! Love her name, she seems very "playful." ;)

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  10. over here best mate would mean best friend - but bringing the other scenario into play could liven the story up even more

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  11. Love the twist at the end. She's trying to pull a Mrs. Robinson. Great post!

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  12. Oh yes, yes she does. She screams cougar.

    Loved this!

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  13. Ah a cougar in disguise or as Lani said, a red hot MILF. Yep, Gino may end up getting more than a plum photo job. Nicely done.

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  14. Au contrare, a woman goes after what she wants. younger men beware. nice FFF

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  15. A little Mrs. Robinson action. Wonderful twist. I love curvy cougers ;-)

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  16. I think Gino doth protest too much. He wants a bite of the forbidden fruit!
    Nice job.

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