Friday, 17 February 2012

Flash Fiction Friday #10 - 17 February

 Friday is upon us again. Here we are again for our Flash Fiction Friday Fun.
One hundred words, no more no less, to create a story from a given picture.
This week the picture is chosen by yours truly. And this is what I saw.
Please stop by other talented flashers to see what they saw :)

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The Date

Kelly picked up her fruit cocktail and took a sip. Then turning to Mark she moaned, “I can feel his eyes burning into my neck. I wish he’d go away.”

“He’s your lap dog honey.” Mark replied with a laugh. “But I must admit this is very creepy. I mean, who brings a brother along to a date these days? You never used to need a chaperone.”

“It’s because of last night. He’s very protective.”

“Oh Kelly, he’s not your Father.”

“I know, but you should have heard him. He went berserk. In the end I had to tell him.”  


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12 comments:

  1. gemma parkes17 February 2012 at 09:25

    You're such a tease Naomi! I'm dying to know what she told him and what happened last night! Great post!

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  2. Horrorwritingdaddy17 February 2012 at 11:19

    TELL HIM WHAT! Oh, damn these 100 tiny words. What happened last night? Tease!

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  3. Cassandre Dayne17 February 2012 at 12:14

    I do love the little endings that leave you hanging - don't you?

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  4. ERP17 February 2012 at 13:56

    Damn Naomi, give us the deets! What happened last night?

    Great FFF as always.

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  5. C R Guiliano17 February 2012 at 13:59

    Oh man!! I'm with everyone else, such a tease!! What happened? What did she tell him? Why did he go beserk? Grrrrr Great....tantilizing....post!

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  6. Davee17 February 2012 at 15:27

    OOOHH, Crap, what did she have to tell him???!!

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  7. Kendel Davi17 February 2012 at 16:37

    I want to know what happened last night? Nice tease and tension, Naomi!

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  8. Benjamin Tiberius Russell17 February 2012 at 19:51

    Aw that is so cruel. What the hell happened last night and did she tell him the whole truth or did she water it down? Naomi, you are such a little tease or in this case, flasher. I want to see all of it. You've got my mouth watering for it, but all you give me is lick.

    Excellent, excellent.

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  9. Sara York17 February 2012 at 21:33

    What did she have to tell him? This one was good!

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  10. Yvonne Nicolas19 February 2012 at 02:19

    Oh c’mon! What she’d tell him, that she wasn’t a virgin? LOL!

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  11. Rolling Muse In The Roses19 February 2012 at 02:51

    Oh wow!! I want to know now what happened the night before. :) Awesome post!

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  12. Lisa Worrall19 February 2012 at 11:04

    What did they do last night???? Great post :)

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