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This week my excerpt comes from a WIP
This week my excerpt comes from a WIP
Frank
eased down from the train on to the platform and looked all around
him. There were quite a few people milling around, and he didn’t
see anyone at first that he knew. Suddenly he heard a shriek.
“FRANK!”
The
sound of his name rang in Frank's ears as someone charged toward him.
As
they neared, Frank recognized a short, dark haired woman of about nineteen, who was Ruth, his younger sister. He stopped, and dropped his
bags on the platform, holding his arms out to her, laughing.
She launched at him, however and flung her arms around his body, almost
knocking him flying.
“Hello
Squirt,” Frank laughed as he swung her around. “Still a titch I
see.”
“And
you’re a beanpole,” she retorted. “And a pale one at that!”
“Missed
me?”
“Like
a hole in the head! Of course I have, you daft thing.”
Frank
looked down at the wedding band on Ruth's third finger. He frowned,
realizing she had gone through with the marriage despite his
reservations. He remembered receiving a short letter from Ruth,
explaining that after her pregnant, Ruth's boyfriend Derek had
promised to make things legal and marry Ruth.
Frank
didn't trust him, however, and knew this would be the end to all of
his sister's plans for the future. He had taken an instant dislike to
Derek, the first time he set eyes on him. There was something he
reckoned he was keeping from Ruth and therefore someone not to be
trusted.
You have me intrigued.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading, and your kind comment
Deletegreat welcome home. Love the tease!
ReplyDeleteThanks Angelica, I value your comments
DeleteGreat tease, Naomi. Mind you, I feel a tad worried for Ruth now. Hope he's wrong about her husband :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Doris. Time will tell about him
DeleteWelcome! Great tease! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ravenna
DeleteIntriguing , love this tease :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Elodie
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